ALTEREGO'S PROFILE

I dunno, I think you should keep it simple... get rid of the distorted silhouette on the back and the dot of light on the ground. Also, the words "red dawn" would probably look better if they were colored red. =P

Way too dark. Like, way, way too dark. Even against the already dark background of this gamepage... Seriously. =/

Edit: I mentioned the gamepage because things tend to look darker against a white bg, and clearer against a black one. So, hum... yeah.

Edit: Now it's too clear for what you had originally intended. xD You need to find a nice in-between.

Edit: Just a tiny bit darker and you're set. =P

Edit: Perfect! :thumbsup:

@Newblack: Nice. Very creative scribbles, you should try to polish them... My favorite is the scuba-diving octopus.

@SorceressKyrsty: Not bad. I really don't see a problem with the eyes, I think you're good at drawing faces actually, but you still got some trouble with the length and position of legs and arms, and need more practice drawing clothes as well.

@Felix20: Well, I could give you some feedback, but it would be useless because pirate dinos don't NEED arms.

@Oh_no_im_melting: Whoa! Very nice job. It looks really professional, I like the sketchiness of it all and how you still managed for different textures and materials to look realistic enough. My only qualm with it would be that it is way too dark.

@JosephSeraph: Not bad at all, I like the colors and design you use. You have a very distinctive style. Keep it up!

@Bonehead11: Hey, that is really good, especially if you're just starting with digital painting... Like Creation said, it is kind of blurry, so what you need to do is to give more definition to shapes, textures and stuff. You may also need to work at bigger resolutions and to try with other brushes to achieve different kind of effects, because until now it all looks like if it was done with the same brush and a very small scale.

@Creation: Well, to begin with I think you need to take extra care of your lineart, because sometimes is rather messy or just plain jagged, if you aren't too good drawing free-hand you can always try with vectors. For the coloring I think you should stick to solids, I mean trying not to blend them so much; as well as using less contrast. Lastly, don't worry too much if your drawings look like Zelda or Mario, that's just silly.

Here's an example of the direction I think you should take:

Aww... no sandstorm and no tumbleweeds. =(

Edit: Well, I think it's visible enough... If anything maybe you should add that classic lighting effect around the character.