NEUTRON_DUST'S PROFILE

A lot of the shadows in the game were drawn and not auto created and I got to a point where I wasn't sure where too much was. What would be helpful is if someone could look at all the environments in the demo I'm about to upload.

P.S. I'm sure there's a bunch of other weird things. You come to a point where you just absolutely NEED new eyes on projects you are doing by yourself.

Here for help, guys.

Hoping for some suggestions on my description.
I'm totally lost on grammar sometimes so I'm sure there is a lot of room for improvement. The current description is below. I have already fixed some things, but I want to make sure it's right so I don't waste the mod's time unnecessarily.

"Embark on an accidental adventure with Danger Bill, a washed up has been who just needs to pay the rent. Follow the wacky cast of characters as they embark on an adventure into comedy inspired by 80's buddy action movies. Bill is an unemployed adventurer who finds himself in need of some quick cash to help pay the rent. His journey into financial ruin takes a turn for the better when he is contracted to escort a mysterious young lady to meet her cave-dwelling, hermit, uncle. Unravel the mystery of the Peanut Butter Cult and their connection to the Temple of the Torn Anus. Save a nation as you help save the King from a religious coupe.

Features:

Fast Travel System: Minimum unnecessary travel.

Mapping and Quest Tracking.

Dynamic Lighting: Turn on and off in Special menu for different computer and
connection speeds.

Dynamically updating HUD that tracks status effects on individual party members
with no need to open the status menu."

Thanks in advance guys.