The art style seems interesting... a little creepy-cute somehow. Now, I'm not good on it but I think the text needs a little proof-reading (just a little nitpick).
I like the character sheet design :^D. I'm watching this >_<.
author=orochii The art style seems interesting... a little creepy-cute somehow. Now, I'm not good on it but I think the text needs a little proof-reading (just a little nitpick).
I like the character sheet design :^D. I'm watching this >_<.
Hey thanks for letting me know. Can you tell me which parts of the text are wrong? I wouldn't want incorrect grammar on the bio page. thank you!
Likes: Blood O-
Dislikes: Mess
Bio: Pumpkinton's first resident. Spends most of her immortal life reading. Likes to collect teacups. Her enchanted cane tends to unnecessarily bring objects from another dimensions.
I think something like that should be mostly fine. Just some minor changes, like articles and pronouns to help in keeping the meaning on the sentences (even writing this I have problems deciding over when to pick "in"/"on"/"to" "orz).