Wow, that lot feedback you have XD
1. I forgot to add instruction, my bad, i will see if i can put it here,
2. You right, my english kind a bad. I will consider your request after i finished remake the dialogue.
6. Yeah, i also realize that the dialogue have few cheesy line, right now I'm in the middle of remake it.
7. Is that too much? I tried to match the music with the event so it gave more feeling.
8. I also agree, i will try to fasten it next.
9. How did you notice this XD, yeah i don't find good growling sound so i edit it from something else.
11/ 12/ 13
All the map in the middle of remake, i will take your feedback into consideration.
The demo not ended yet. After you gain control of Aele talk to girl in second floor, she will tell you where you should go next.
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