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White Sky

So I've finished the game it's super good! i would give this game a 4.5 star but that's just me.

the game really builds that one key character really well, and is the main strength of this game, it would really be something if you wrote more about the player controlled character and other side characters.

Of course, the lore about town hall and the world could be expanded a bit in various ways, since you got such a somewhat unique setting.

the choice system is really really well built with the amount of time you had, i can't really think of any obvious improvements beside making the choices harder, like give the father character more writing so the choice will be harder to make.

so that's some general advice above, what makes this game so good is the amount of choices that the player have to consider and that one likable character in this game with the writing and diverse face expressions, i can't really find a single flaw with the story line. though there's minimum game play, i see you kind of followed the witch's house style of scare, which fits the mysterious mood and story of the game. these are all elements that you did really well and should consider when making your next game. (if you decide to do so)

i got the ending where someone copied markiplier's hair style and after you run away from home, you met someone from your class so you can all turn into anime girls? btw is that the best ending? it certainly wasn't depressing though.

White Sky

so what does the color cards do? and what's up with the town hall?

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Darkest Dreams

nah I'm not really bothered by it, although i pointed out some flaws but i love the game very much! :D

Darkest Dreams

wah this is a very good game! very enjoyable and fun, i had the most scare at the dark maze puzzle @_@
the secret about do not disturb the beast, is that something happens when you go to the top room right?
overall a excellent game with many scares, there's like two grammar mistake that i noticed but i never really care about that sort of stuff.
if you save your game in the room where you are chased by bunch of skeletons, you die instantly if you load it so i have to backtrack to the spider maze room @_@
i got the true ending at the first try, so in the second try i burned the book at the library and got the bad ending, but in that ending i didn't die after i went out the house, that one monster just walked to me and trapped me, i can't move at all and can't hit esc so i have to close the game, it didn't happen if i burn the book at other locations so it's a bug? but it's really cool and good design choice if it isn't O.O
i would give the game a 4.1 but because of the skeleton room bug i think i would give it a 4, thanks for the hard work! :D

Crimson Light

wah this is a very good game! I really liked the whole system of fear and seals and stuff, plus this game gives off a sense of exploration though I'm not sure if that's intended.
the story line is fine for a short game, and I'm really looking forward to the next game, perhaps you should play around more with the concept of a fear system?
Overall a nice game, I would give it a 3.8 star, thanks for the hard work!

Hinterland

Yeah i love the ending too, not sure if it's really the best ending though but i got the same one as Sans.
overall the game is really good! of course it's not like THE masterpiece of the century but i can't think of any major flaws of this game, and i'm surprised at the creativity of the content in this game, like the different types of monster designs and stuff. the rope shortcut at the end really helped.
i really do recommend this game to everyone who has time, it's not anything groundbreaking but it's a nice short story.

hey, can someone help me out? what's the use of various objects like dust pan that i haven't used through the whole game? there must be a secret somewehre....hints?
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