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Wowwwww, okay then. I took that really out of context .-. I apologize to both of you since that was really ridiculous of me. Anyways, I probably should note that I'll be going on vacation soon and won't be able to write much for Megumi, but I'll make sure to keep up on the threads here.
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author=Dozen
Don't interpret a harsh post as a personal attack. I'm just serious like that^^ We can't afford humor or social niceties in these topics. What was important to get the warning across.
I would of taken it as just a normal warning and understood as it is, but saying that I needed to see a doctor is far from being constructive, especially since it was just about a route that didn't agree or disagree with something directly. Either or, it's not worth discussing at this point since I already said I was going to cut that scene out.
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author=Marrend
"Don't do anything reckless.", thinking that <player> would attempt to provide some kind of "If you beat them up, wouldn't that ultimately prove the rumors they are spreading?"
Actually that was a land mine where she overreacted but then understood the players point, so she stopped freaking out. I believe there's only one land mine in the choices there where you fail the route. It's not "Don't do anything reckless" or "That's not smart" but I don't remember the name of the choice.
And with the Sota event...
The event with Sota wasn't actually serious. Sota wasn't being serious either, which I think could be easily caught by the Neanderthal comment. But, later in the route it'll say something somewhere where Megumi finds out that they only do stuff like that because of her short temper.
Also; for the Soul Check I was thinking about putting it at 25, rather than 30 since 30 was bit high for it only being at Story 13.
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author=Dozen
Also see a doctor. This isn't an insult, and it's dead serious. Any portrayal of them in Heartache are required to be negative henceforward. The scene may be funny, but the machine should not. It's a rule, not a suggestion. Overseer off.
Whoa, whoa. I'm not into that stuff if that's what you were thinking. Like I said, I was using it as a comedic relief, and I wasn't a fan of the scene to start with. And YES, I do know they were illegal, I've been to Japan on vacation and heard of them (I was pretty happy that I didn't see them, I wouldn't have wanted any of my family or me to see the men/women into that kind of stuff.) And "see a doctor"? I didn't portray them in a positive matter in the script, I understand that your dead serious about this stuff, but I wasn't saying I agreed with those machines, I didn't really even portray them as good or bad. Like I said in my previous comment, I was going to cut the scene out.
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author=Mute
Let me summarize: there are some problems, but you're making a good story. Keep it up~.
About the vending machine part--I only added it there because it's a real thing that's actually pretty common in Japan. But I do think I'll edit this part out, since I'm not the biggest fan of it either, and only used it for comedic relief in the scene.
To the player having thoughts--I agree, I thought something was lacking there.
For the "Megumi left." Parts, they do this in the built-in characters so I wanted to make her exit pretty brief since the player and her usually would say their goodbyes.
To the player having thoughts--I agree, I thought something was lacking there.
For the "Megumi left." Parts, they do this in the built-in characters so I wanted to make her exit pretty brief since the player and her usually would say their goodbyes.
On the rest, thank you! I'm thinking about going back and changing a bit up from it on some parts. I also wasn't sure if the player acted like himself, but I guess with a bit more "thinking" dialogue he should! Thanks for the criticism, Mute~! I'll work on these problems.
EDIT: Mute, I DO have another question for you about the Soul Check...
Did you get to it? And did you think it was cheesy? Either or, I tried to make it like a realistic problem.
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Damn! I thought I error free, but I did add that part at the last minute. .-. Sorry about that, I won't be able to fix it in the files till Wednesday since I don't have my computer right now.
Edit: If you just change the 'Class A' to 'Classroom A' in Story 17 then it should be error free since I play tested rest.
Edit: If you just change the 'Class A' to 'Classroom A' in Story 17 then it should be error free since I play tested rest.
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Yay~! It's here! Here's a very beta version of Megumi.
It's only about 18 stories, but I wanted to make sure I was heading in a good direction. But I hope its okay so far, I'm quite the perfectionist so I'm pretty anxious about this. But, yeah~!
Well, you can either use the alt and fn keys to make them, or you can just copy them off of the internetwhich I totally am not guilty of.
It's only about 18 stories, but I wanted to make sure I was heading in a good direction. But I hope its okay so far, I'm quite the perfectionist so I'm pretty anxious about this. But, yeah~!
author=KevincalanorWhoa, you're going to check it all? That a quite lot of stuff to fix. xD
About the ears, I'm thinking a quite lot about that, although not really important to her own route, one can (should, as there's no supernatural elements on her route) just consider that those ears at the pic are fake and things are settled.
I have some future plans that may require the truth behind Seiko's lineage, she will be a Half-yokai or a descendant of the Deity Holo.
It stills undecided because the reason of her ears on her original history "Extinction" just can't happen at HTC (She was a target from a experiment due her combat skills) Tried to make a RPG out of Extinction once, but didn't went too far, I don't know anything out of the complete ordinary at RPGVX after all :p
Yep, yep! Did you only want me to check the story file? Oh well! x3 Also on Eliza's origins are quite interesting--I ACTUALLY did see one of the pictures you posted of her from "Extinction." But yeah, as for that anime you linked I'll have to add it to my animes-to-be-watched list! (I went to the Holo link and got interested in it >.>) But in Megumi's character she's suppose to be a raccoon yokai, but that won't apply in her Heartache 101.
author=Marrend
I keep wondering how people do things like this. I mean, emoticons aren't my thing, but, it's something of a curiosity all the same.
Well, you can either use the alt and fn keys to make them, or you can just copy them off of the internet
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Hey guys!~
It's been a while, and I can successfully say that Megumi's beta will be released sometime this week or next week. (Most likely this week.)
She doesn't require Clean Mode to be Off because I've seen the built-in character scenes so many times I probably have it memorized. Probably. But yeah! In the meantime I'll probably edit this post later and add the file! ^_^
Also, BDFALCON--those clothing edits are awesome! Especially that girls' dress, it's adorable. (◕‿◕✿)
And to Marrend--I tested Emiko, didn't get through a whole playthough yet, but I really like the music you're using, and I really like her personality. I'll make sure to continue testing her character.
EDIT:
Also!~ I remade Megumi's tachie set, since I didn't like her appearence nor did I think her appearance fit her personality. So!~ Here she is...
To Kevincalanor...~
It's been a while, and I can successfully say that Megumi's beta will be released sometime this week or next week. (Most likely this week.)
She doesn't require Clean Mode to be Off because I've seen the built-in character scenes so many times I probably have it memorized. Probably. But yeah! In the meantime I'll probably edit this post later and add the file! ^_^
Also, BDFALCON--those clothing edits are awesome! Especially that girls' dress, it's adorable. (◕‿◕✿)
And to Marrend--I tested Emiko, didn't get through a whole playthough yet, but I really like the music you're using, and I really like her personality. I'll make sure to continue testing her character.
EDIT:
Also!~ I remade Megumi's tachie set, since I didn't like her appearence nor did I think her appearance fit her personality. So!~ Here she is...
To Kevincalanor...~
I fixed the grammar issues in the profiles file. I got about 1/4 of the grammar fixed with the ElizaMain. Btw, I see those EARS, is she a Yokai? I swear she looks like a fox yokai and now I remember the "wolfypack" part. Is she a wolf yokai?
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Late response. Sorry bout' that.
I could edit the file and correct the mistakes whenever I can, if you'd like.
Urrg! I still have yet to open her file again.
author=Kevincalanor
Edit: I don't have much trouble with spelling, due the Notepad spellcheckers, but I really could use some help with grammar. :p
I could edit the file and correct the mistakes whenever I can, if you'd like.
author=Marrend
Emikoupdated!
I still need to figure out how to get where this route wants to go from where it is now. If that makes any sense.
Urrg! I still have yet to open her file again.
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So today I opened up Heartache 101 and tried clean mode. The only custom content that was turned on was Masako's and Uchioniko's. However when the first Uchioniko event popped up, I only got introduced to Ruri and didn't get to see the others. I know this isn't an issue with the Uchioniko pack itself because it works fine with clean mode off. I'd just like to get this issue and/or bug known for future developers, etc. So now, I won't be able to make my characters available for clean mode on. ;___; Oh well.
Well thanks Marrend. By the way... I have yet to reach for Emikos file, but it will be soon!
Also a note to Kevincalanor, great content so far with Eliza.
She's a great character that has a lot of variety to her. Keep writing, I'm interested as to what the other routes will be. And also, if you need help with grammar mistakes OR spelling, I'd be willing to help. ^_^
author=Marrend
No-no-no. I meant that you would add one to each of the IDs you wanted to use so that our ID listing would look like...
-listing snippet-
...that. Which it does.
Well thanks Marrend. By the way... I have yet to reach for Emikos file, but it will be soon!
Also a note to Kevincalanor, great content so far with Eliza.
I got to the part where I asked Yuriko (I'm not quite sure if that's her name.) about the fight with Eliza and some guy on the track team. Well, and then, I got yelled at by Eliza because she overheard a conversation between the player and Miki.
She's a great character that has a lot of variety to her. Keep writing, I'm interested as to what the other routes will be. And also, if you need help with grammar mistakes OR spelling, I'd be willing to help. ^_^
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