i wrote a poem (lol emo) Topic

3253

04/19/2008 10:23 AM

I wrote it looking out the window at work yesterday. Open to analysis at crits.

Summer seems to invoke in me the worst emotions.
As I pass a glimpse of
sunlight blonding the dancing weave of meadows,
warming the earth, blanketed curves
of land now uncovered
rolling lively to shimmering pools,
inspires a fluttering, vengeful, melancholic longing
for something beautiful.

kentona

Bunnyhug

21027

04/19/2008 11:12 AM

Sounds good to me (I never understood poetry though). I like it, but that's about all I can say about it.

demondestiny

889

04/19/2008 05:54 PM

yeah, it sounds good blitzen. I have never been any good at poetry so that looks like solid gold to me.

NoblemanNick

I'm bringing this world back for you and for me.

1390

04/19/2008 06:17 PM

Your like my friend he writes emo poetry

I just go home even though your not there,
I sit there the tears drying up from my eyes,
I am still waiting for you even though you'll never come,
I'll die here and no one will care,
my image fading away like an old photograph,
goodbye old friend I still wait even though you nor there

Thats my attempt at an emo poem

Blitzen

3253

04/19/2008 08:16 PM

If you want to know what the poem is about click the spoiler. Otherwise I'd like to hear your own interpretations.

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The idea was to anthropomorphize summer, so it could be more than a season but also a body. Its as much about a girl as it is about the season.

I WROTE A POEM (LOL EMO)

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